Daniel D. Teoli Jr. Posted January 1 Posted January 1 (edited) You going into filmmaking Robert? Give us some backstory on it. Reminds me of a student film, albeit higher grade. Did you just scan someone else's film, or did you make it? What was your part in the production? Sections seem a little flat as far as contrast. But it looks OK in general. The trailer has to cover lots of topics here and it needs to do a better job in wetting the appetite or telling the story. It does not do a good job telling me what the film is about. Maybe someone else will get the message. Things pass over my head sometimes. But the point is you need to bring in an audience of all sorts with deciphering your trailer. If you are putting the loud music combined with the dialogue, you can't understand what the actors are saying. What are your plans with the film? Edited January 1 by Daniel D. Teoli Jr.
Joerg Polzfusz Posted January 1 Posted January 1 Hi! Great, teasing shots. But I don’t like the soundtrack.
Daniel D. Teoli Jr. Posted January 4 Posted January 4 Mail me a DVD or BD of it Robert and I can give you better feedback.
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