Short film - The re-shot Version

[Ckulakov]

Dear Filmmakers,

 

After watching my film in comparison to other indie films, I realized that I must totally reshoot the the first 1/3 in order to give it more PUNCH , i wanted to visually express the character and I new I needed more intimate or compelling compositions.

 

After a disappointing prom night, confused and sensitive young man with a passion for music comes home and escapes the dark world of superficial and purely sexual high school relationships through his musically motivated visions. Will his imagination free him and what is the reality that awaits him?

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9imeMaKJL8

 

 

Please give me some feedback, I would really apprecaite a chance to learn what I must improve to be more successful in my delivery.

 

 

Thanks

[David Sweetman]

Nice, much stronger visuals, I like how you used shadow and contrast, I think that's important especially in black and white. And the dream sequence is awesome too.