Young Pizzy Posted February 12, 2016 Share Posted February 12, 2016 Hello guys Please do watch the second episode of my Web series "Diary Of Porsha" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JD Hartman Posted February 13, 2016 Share Posted February 13, 2016 http://www.cinematography.com/index.php?showtopic=69799&hl= If she died at the end of Ep1, is this her twin? Don't like the laugh track or the jittery panning either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Pizzy Posted February 15, 2016 Author Share Posted February 15, 2016 She fainted, she didn't die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JD Hartman Posted February 15, 2016 Share Posted February 15, 2016 She fainted, she didn't die Really? In reply to Freya's post, you posted, " Posted 28 December 2015 - 01:28 PM Thanks Freya I'm glad you like it... To answer a few of your questions. Yes, she died at the end." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Pizzy Posted February 16, 2016 Author Share Posted February 16, 2016 Oops! Dat was a mistake, she just passed out... she didn't die! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jan Tore Soerensen Posted February 16, 2016 Share Posted February 16, 2016 I'm gonna try to give you some constructive criticism here. The camera shakes way to much for a piece like this. It should be on a gimbal or steadycam. The sound was a bit weird, and the laughter just didn't fit in at all. If you are going with laughter, at least it has to sound good. It can't cut like that. I like the location, but I feel like you could have utilized it more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Pizzy Posted February 16, 2016 Author Share Posted February 16, 2016 Thanks for criticism Jan, will work more and improve on your points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wiliam Cardoza Posted February 17, 2016 Share Posted February 17, 2016 I actually like the incongruent laugh track :) but i.m.h.o. it takes so long to get there setting things up with the tilt down and pan and him deciding to go talk to her. When he says "hello, hi" at around 00:53 i.m.h.o. is when it starts to get interesting :) I can't wait to see the next one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Pizzy Posted February 17, 2016 Author Share Posted February 17, 2016 Thanks William, did you watch the first episode? The next episode will be up asap! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wiliam Cardoza Posted February 17, 2016 Share Posted February 17, 2016 yes I checked it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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