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Feedback for my first short film, please :)


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Hi Guys, I hope you are well, so here is my first short film (as a DOP):
https://youtu.be/lIMt8Sl6LK4
 I would really appreciate any feedback from you in terms of the cinematography, so I can learn something from you ? Thank you very much in advance, here is the kit we used:
- Canon C300
- Samyang Cine lenses set
-Arri 2K
-2x Arri 300
-3x Dedo
 

Thank you in advance for any tips and comments!

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Nice work!

Love the lighting and the whole look. Dragged a little for me I speed up the last half. Only thing I would change is for the mom's boob to flop out when she is under the bed. I see you got a big team on it. I was going to say you got talent. But will have to say your team has talent. 

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