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FEEDBACK NEEDED - New Crazy Short Film


Max Hall

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Yea it worked, tho IDK about killing the cat. Looked good. The only thing I would have done differently cinematography wise is probably that light on the black woman. I would have balanced everything in that scene for daylight and let the shadows happen more naturally. It was the only part that took me out of the story. Otherwise, it worked well. 

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18 hours ago, Tyler Purcell said:

Yea it worked, tho IDK about killing the cat. Looked good. The only thing I would have done differently cinematography wise is probably that light on the black woman. I would have balanced everything in that scene for daylight and let the shadows happen more naturally. It was the only part that took me out of the story. Otherwise, it worked well. 

Thanks for the feedback. Agreed about the lighting. I was disappointed about that in that scene. Glad to hear you thought it worked!

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