hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
ok
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
the war movie
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
was shot on hd
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
its too light in the forest
Kristian says:
no
Kristian says:
it wasnt
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
my only complaint
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
otherwise, it looks like a lowbudget war movie
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
thats all
Kristian says:
yes
Kristian says:
but what is it
Kristian says:
that doesnt make it look strong
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
well
Kristian says:
i have some concerns
Kristian says:
hear me out
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
first of all, the lighting is not in tune with hte mood
Kristian says:
VERY TRUE
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i find it too green
Kristian says:
however
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
there is no sense of danger
Kristian says:
first shot in slow mo
Kristian says:
works great
Kristian says:
as a hand held shot
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however
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notice the 3rd shot
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its a static close up
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of some leaves
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and some people passing behind
Kristian says:
that is a bad shot
Kristian says:
that is one of the reasons it looks amateurish
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the shot with the military car
Kristian says:
that comes into the picture
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he should have it start inside the picture more
Kristian says:
its like the camera is watiting for it
Kristian says:
instead of just capturing it
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
the 3rd shot is bad because its not continuous with the other medium shots
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
its not a closeup, and its not a medium shot
Kristian says:
right
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
its in between
Kristian says:
its just bad
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
its an ungly shot
Kristian says:
yes
Kristian says:
do u agree
Kristian says:
abotu the car
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
yes
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
but thats being anal
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
(the car)
Kristian says:
ok lets move on
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
its just afew seconds
Kristian says:
2 shots after the car
Kristian says:
theres a close up of a solider
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which utilizes low key lighting
Kristian says:
it is a great shot
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but all the other shots should have been low key too
Kristian says:
well not necessarily
Kristian says:
melick is high key
Kristian says:
but they are too light in an ugly way
Kristian says:
for ths trailer
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
malick is high key
Kristian says:
the tilt of the picture of the soilder
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bothers me
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im not sure why
Kristian says:
its prolly just cos we have signs of amateurishness preivously
Kristian says:
so this one seems corny
Kristian says:
altho there is really nothing wrong with it
hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:
which one
Kristian says:
its a tilt up
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of a static soldier
Kristian says:
i pressume it is a picture of a solider
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then u have the music kick in
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the camera lying int he grass
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the second shot in that sequence
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is a hand that lies in the grass
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the shot lasts too long
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it should be faster
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and the green is really ugly
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plus
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he has just punched up the music
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to be really dramatic
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and then he still uses a dissolve
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from shot to shot
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dissolve is soft and nice
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it doesnt work with the drama of the music
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from there on
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its very good
Kristian says:
all teh shots
Kristian says:
look great