Hi Tarun,
There is a lot of things that I think looks great and has potential. But for me looks are not all.
I´m wandering: "What´s the story". I see elements of fear, discovery and solutions to problems, but I do not see the elements that causes this events. And that leaves me a bit uninterested. You might have a greater story on paper, but I don´t feel or see it in the clip.
Keep working and you will get there.