A Conversation with Mr. D

[Smaisch]

This is a short film we shot this past year on my Canon Gl2. I am looking for some constructive criticism. I sent this in to 4 different festivals, and they all said the same thing. Good story, visually pleasing, but the pacing was waaaay to slow.

 

So I edited it down from 15 min to 11 min and I think it paces much better.

 

Any suggestions would rock. We want our next project to be one step better. Baby steps each time. This is our second attempt at a short film.

 

http://vmix.com/video/1560091/

 

Steve