raphaelle gosse Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 http://www.raphaellegossegardet.com/ This is the last version.The content of this reel was shot exclusively in film. Work done in video will be made available soon. I need some feedback.Please critique it THank you so much Raphaelle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premium Member Walter Graff Posted June 18, 2008 Premium Member Share Posted June 18, 2008 A bit too long for my tastes. Notice some of the shots come from the same piece so some seem to be visual repeats. How about a credit on the web page for the music you use - Title, band, song writer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raphaelle gosse Posted June 19, 2008 Author Share Posted June 19, 2008 THanks for your advice. i 'll try to cut it down a bit.do you see any shot that are poorly executed or just plain boring? Please let me know, raphaelle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jon Rosenbloom Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 The first 30 seconds strikes me as flat and overlit, and like the "film" got lost somewhere in the transfer or compression. The material from the chateau onwards seems much more accomplished. Love the song, but is it a bit too familiar? Best, Jon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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