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hi

 

textures, lighting and framing looks good

 

some problems are still anoying :

in the first part the tv set blinking catches the eye, the smoke machine is too much looks like something is burning under the desk. the suit case looks super empty...

 

in the second part the storm effect isn't really there it's a little like a still camera flashing outdoor.

 

is it a school essay?

 

to avoid the fliker on the tv set you need synchro box to sync the opturation with electricity, not shure you can do it with a BL3

 

the smoke, wait a little and break the "clouds" with a black flag or the slate

 

the storm effect you need a moonlight on the wall behind the talent to shoow a little more off the room and the striking light have to tuch the walls if not it looks fake

 

keep filming hang on

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