My first music video, let me know what you think Jimmie Reign - "Make You Wait"

[Taylor Erickson]

This is my first music video I produced, let me know what you think.

 

Please be honest, I know there are some problems, rip it apart, I just want to learn so I can improve on the next ones.

 

Thanks!

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yh7iis-L3c0

[Ram Shani]

i think the big problem with your video is that i got bored after 1min:(

 

it's not interesting story wise

 

and the cinematography and the lighting is not good to hold the music video

 

 

i am sorry but it look like a "wane be " music video

 

it's very very hard to make a video at low budget and make it look like a 300.000$ music video

[Michael Frymus]

i think the big problem with your video is that i got bored after 1min:(

 

yeah, same here.

and with the rest of what you said.

 

needs some improvement.