Elaine Saulnier Posted March 23, 2011 Share Posted March 23, 2011 Here's my latest project for my cinematography course Shot on a semi-pro JVC camera, edited with FCP and Color. All comments, critiques etc welcome :D -Elaine [youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KGSta4g2mhY] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premium Member Jay Young Posted March 23, 2011 Premium Member Share Posted March 23, 2011 First please change your screen name according to the forum rules. The opening shot is very nice. The score suits it perfectly I think. The 'Walking Outside' sequence seems to be a little muted/pastel color wise. Not sure if that was the intent. The good thing is that even with the (Vietnamese/Tagalog?) dialogue, of which I didn't understand a world, the message of the film comes across. I understand what it's about. The 'Walking Outside' sequence, which I think is suppose to be the memory is a little long for my taste, and I like long takes. Overall I thought it was nice. The only thing I didn't like was the transition between the opening sky and the interior rocking char deal. I don't know if it was the movement of the rocking chair, or the color shift. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elaine Saulnier Posted March 23, 2011 Author Share Posted March 23, 2011 Thanks very much! The language is Thai. If I have time for a re-cut I'll post it up again :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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