Paul Tackett Posted May 28, 2011 Share Posted May 28, 2011 Please critique this short scene. <iframe src="http://player.vimeo.com/video/23449003?title=0&byline=0&portrait=0" width="400" height="225" frameborder="0"></iframe><p><a href="http://vimeo.com/23449003">Cinematography Project</a> from <a href="http://vimeo.com/paultackett">Paul Tackett</a> on <a href="http://vimeo.com">Vimeo</a>.</p> It was shot at night, and meant to look like day. Please let me know what stands out in a bad way, what I did wrong, what I could have done better, what I could have done differently, what shots did not make sense, shots you would have liked to have seen, etc. Thank you so much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Tackett Posted May 29, 2011 Author Share Posted May 29, 2011 sorry for the double post. here is the llink Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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