gerald ruppen Posted October 9, 2011 Share Posted October 9, 2011 Hello Guys We are filmakers from Switzerland. Its a No Budget Project. Please critique my work. What are you guys thinking about the color Grading. TOTENTANZ greetings Gerald Ruppen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Robert G Andrews Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 The overall feeling of this trailer is good and so is the colour grading. By the way I didn't agree with the font type of the title. I would have imagined something smaller and more neutral. Anyway, I noticed that you make a big point of the sky in the beginning, and for no apparent reason. This shot appears kind of random and meaningless. The hooded men walking over the bridge is good, but I'd like to have seen another close-up shot of one of them and your character looking down at them approach. The events, such as running through a wood, feel like someone was having a flashback and I wonder if the shot of the sky at the end may have been a shot from the inside, through the window, just like the earlier shot. Yes, it could have been a POV shot of your character inside and looking through the window. Anyway, you main weakness here is that your shots are random and your elements need to gel together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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