Nicolas Dalli Bortolot Posted March 3, 2013 Share Posted March 3, 2013 Im from Argentina and i would like some feedback of my work. Thanks! https://vimeo.com/51286298 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karen Rodriguez Posted March 6, 2013 Share Posted March 6, 2013 Balanced sense of composition. Solid operating. The lighting in the early family dinner is naturalistic. The last dinner scene is obviously not meant to be naturalistic and it does draw attention to itself. Once the lights start blinking all is forgiven, however. I think you're putting good work out there! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chase DuBose Posted May 20, 2013 Share Posted May 20, 2013 Cut it down would be my suggestion. No reel really needs to be three and a half minutes long. I'd say you can probably say what you need to say in about one and a half minutes. Also, the subtitles are interesting but they might distract from the images. I have to say I read them and made me extremely curious about the project with the girl in the crib but I can't say I was paying as much attention to the cinematography at that point. Just my opinion take it how you may. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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