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Ad Shot on Canon 60D...Critque?


C Kenneybrew

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Hey all,

 

I directed this ad for a doritos competition (obviously I didnt win) but I would like to know what you think of the quality of the shots and camera, style, etc. And any other advice I could improve on.

 

Thanks

 

 

 

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Hey all,

 

I directed this ad for a doritos competition (obviously I didnt win) but I would like to know what you think of the quality of the shots and camera, style, etc. And any other advice I could improve on.

 

Thanks

 

There is a section for critiquing work, this area is for general discussion. It helps in keeping things tidy. Also, you do need to use your full name, it's one of the forum rules.

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The lighting is very flat. The focus was off in a couple of shots. I think that the composition could have been more creative. Some of the colors are supersaturated to the point that they clip, and the overall look is very "video".

 

Having said all that, I'm sure you learned a lot from this, and next year's submission will probably be amazing.

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