Davi Silveira Posted July 3, 2016 Share Posted July 3, 2016 So it's been a long time coming for me. I finally got my reel edited. I'd love to hear some feed back. I'll be adding a few more things i shot that are still in post production but I want to keep its length at 3:30ish... Let me know what you think, I really appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JeremyA Posted September 8, 2016 Share Posted September 8, 2016 I think you defiantly have a clear style. I would cut it down to 1:30-2:00. Nice work so far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davi Silveira Posted October 12, 2016 Author Share Posted October 12, 2016 I think you defiantly have a clear style. I would cut it down to 1:30-2:00. Nice work so far! Jeremy, Thanks for your feed back. I'll cut it down some, I agree it's a bit long. I'm curious what you see as my style, I very much in the frame of mind of augmenting natural light. Delicately and deliberately or not at all. I study a ton of Gordon Willis, Conrad Hall, and Roger Deakins. Cheers, Davi Silveira www.davi-silveira.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davi Silveira Posted December 18, 2016 Author Share Posted December 18, 2016 Alright, I followed your advice. The Trailer has now been cut to two minutes. It's my 'Narrative' cut. Let me know if you have any more thoughts. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruce Greene Posted December 18, 2016 Share Posted December 18, 2016 Well done Davi! There's a lot of very strong stuff here. But a little bit that's not so special. You know which shots I'm talking about I'm sure. Cut them out. We won't miss them and you'll leave a better impression. Just my gut reaction :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davi Silveira Posted December 19, 2016 Author Share Posted December 19, 2016 Well done Davi! There's a lot of very strong stuff here. But a little bit that's not so special. You know which shots I'm talking about I'm sure. Cut them out. We won't miss them and you'll leave a better impression. Just my gut reaction :) Bruce!! Wow, good to hear from you, It's been a long time! Thank you for the critique, I'll switch those clips out for sure. I have some better stuff I can replace them with as well. I always enjoyed reading your updates while you filmed in Russia! :) I never told you this but I learned a lot from you, even though we only briefly worked together on that short in LA with Vanessa. Cheers, Davi 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davi Silveira Posted October 20, 2017 Author Share Posted October 20, 2017 Bruce, here it is. I actually changed it quite a bit. Let me know your thoughts, I decided to keep this reel for my Narrative work only and keep it as short as possible. Thanks for your feed back man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruce Greene Posted October 20, 2017 Share Posted October 20, 2017 Bruce!! Wow, good to hear from you, It's been a long time! Thank you for the critique, I'll switch those clips out for sure. I have some better stuff I can replace them with as well. I always enjoyed reading your updates while you filmed in Russia! :) I never told you this but I learned a lot from you, even though we only briefly worked together on that short in LA with Vanessa. Cheers, Davi Thanks Davi for the kind words. Just saw this now almost a year later :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davi Silveira Posted October 20, 2017 Author Share Posted October 20, 2017 Thanks Davi for the kind words. Just saw this now almost a year later :) haha yeah no problem. I just now finally got around to fixing it lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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