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Mark Williams

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This is my concept trailer for a proposed new film that has UK government HMRC SEIS approval This means up to 70% of investment in tax relief. The film will be set at an American airbase in the UK. I'm also looking for investors.

 

www.vimeo.com/214146101

 

 

 

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I would change some of shots which have cinematography issues (or if not possible, reframe them) , add more closeups and maybe drop some airplane shots. I would've loved to see more alien shots. I know it's a concept trailer but it might sell better this way :)

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I think the explosions and gun flashes are a little heavy handed ie look too 'video'...you could probably tone them down a bit. I think you could easily tone down a few of the other CGi bits too to improve them...a bit more edge blur? Nice concept trailer though.

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