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Cinematography feedback - Short film

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Liked, specially because was kinda spooky but not too serious. Nice pace too. Some camera choices I don't like.

What I really don't like is how the shadow of the clock dances around when the time pass. I understand that the sunset generate a different shadow but in my opinion, you should fake it and only change the tone and not the shadow so much, because looks messy.


Probably nobody think it until the edit room, but still...



But great cinematography an idea, good short!

Keep the good work!

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The shadow on the clock didn't bother me as much as the color shift. But I really didn't notice it that much until the previous poster mentioned the shadow shift. The shadow shift may look good, if the color shift was not there. I'd have to see it.

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Thanks for your thoughtful replies. It's a time of day shift, so the color temps and the shadows change, or that was the thought behind it at least. The shadow does make it jumpy and harder to understand that the time on the clock is moving.

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