Scott Peters Posted March 8, 2019 Share Posted March 8, 2019 Hi guys Long time reader, first-time poster on the forum. Recently shot a short film, you can see here: https://vimeo.com/322197103 Would love some feedback. For context, I shot it as a one-man band, on Alexa Mini with Zeiss Superspeeds and glimmer glass. A lot of neg fill, 2 x astra litepanels and 1 x litepanels gemini. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob Speziale Posted March 8, 2019 Share Posted March 8, 2019 (edited) Beautifully shot and great music. Not a fan of multiple quick cuts and being bombarded with multiple quick images. Didn't really follow the monologue. Multiple images + multiple words caused me to lose the thread. Edited March 8, 2019 by Bob Speziale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scott Peters Posted March 9, 2019 Author Share Posted March 9, 2019 Beautifully shot and great music. Not a fan of multiple quick cuts and being bombarded with multiple quick images. Didn't really follow the monologue. Multiple images + multiple words caused me to lose the thread. Thanks Bob - appreciate the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Connolly Posted March 9, 2019 Share Posted March 9, 2019 Like the lighting - has a nice look overall. I don't think the music works - its too upbeat and busy. It fights the voice over, too much going on in the same frequency. Also it feels at odds with the image and VO - they are darker and melancholic and the music is too happy, jars. The images suggest a more Clint Mansell esq track Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Takoda Porembski Posted March 10, 2019 Share Posted March 10, 2019 Really enjoyed your images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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