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Very nice! Good range of photography and it looks good.

@.+/- 53 the guy looks kinda choppy coming into the frame.

@ +/-1.47 it looks kinda choppy with beginning of the couch scene. (Or did you want it that way?)

Anyway, no big deal. But the real issue is your text at the end is hard to read. I'd say may your text bigger and more readable. 

Good luck!

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14 hours ago, Daniel D. Teoli Jr. said:

Very nice! Good range of photography and it looks good.

@.+/- 53 the guy looks kinda choppy coming into the frame.

@ +/-1.47 it looks kinda choppy with beginning of the couch scene. (Or did you want it that way?)

Anyway, no big deal. But the real issue is your text at the end is hard to read. I'd say may your text bigger and more readable. 

Good luck!

Hi,

 

Thanks! Yeah, you're right about the text at the end. I will correct it. When you say the guy at 0:53 looks choppy, is it because of the jump cut of him already partly in the frame? 

 

Thanks! 

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