Andrew Gooi Posted August 1, 2007 Share Posted August 1, 2007 It's a short clip that I do every year for my country's independence day. Let me know what you think. I'm new to this forum and I'm all ears to your critique. Thanks! http://youtube.com/watch?v=W0Kll_NZv5s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cristian Olariu Posted August 1, 2007 Share Posted August 1, 2007 Nice general feeling. Good pace. Some of the shots could've used more lighting, like the one from down below as he is reading the card, you can't really see his face in it. Also, instead of a profile as he is reading the card I would've done a POV from the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brant Collins Posted August 2, 2007 Share Posted August 2, 2007 Looks good. The pan from the driver to the card could have been smoother. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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