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Vedran Rapo

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  • 3 weeks later...

Hey nice reel. A few pointers you might want to consider:

 

The shots with the dude shooting all of the doctors and the chick shooting the fat guy on the floor, I'd cut both. The lighting is flat, and they distract from a lot of the other great shots on there.

 

I also think that you need a nice beauty shot, and more movement. some smooth dolly shots or a smooth handheld would add a lot.

 

And what happened to the music video scene? That looked great but we only saw about 3 seconds of it.

 

Just a few thoughts, you can take em or leave em

 

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