abel alvarado Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 please watch the video i shot & edited and please critique my work :lol: i asked the dealership owner if i could record their cool dodge viper 2008 just so i can practice and add it to my collection of demo it may have potential for a commercial dodge viper 2008 http://www.vimeo.com/1505718 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abel alvarado Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 This is color corrected http://www.vimeo.com/1512243 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve McBride Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Wow, at first when I watched it I thought you were using some heavy equipment, then I read you were using just a HV20 and a Merlin. Wow, amazing job. The shots are great and the editing is flawless. One thing that I don't really know if I like or not is that in the color corrected version the Viper looks a bit too lime... I liked the green in the original better. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timofey Mogilnikov Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Nice but too fragmented. Color overburned. Too much 'flashy'. Timewarp with frameblending is a flaw. You waste coolness of transtrack shot by placing it at the beginning. No integral idea in editing... Not bad =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abel alvarado Posted August 19, 2008 Author Share Posted August 19, 2008 Nice but too fragmented. Color overburned. Too much 'flashy'. Timewarp with frameblending is a flaw.You waste coolness of transtrack shot by placing it at the beginning. No integral idea in editing... Not bad =) Thanks for your critique Timofey Mogilnikov. Yea pretty much before I started I knew someone else could have edited this better than me. Though I focus more on camera movement in all my projects, I still need to practice on my editing. I was going to hand this off to an editor & colorist but then i was too eager to see the final project. I may have rushed into it in the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abel alvarado Posted August 19, 2008 Author Share Posted August 19, 2008 Wow, at first when I watched it I thought you were using some heavy equipment, then I read you were using just a HV20 and a Merlin. Wow, amazing job. The shots are great and the editing is flawless. One thing that I don't really know if I like or not is that in the color corrected version the Viper looks a bit too lime... I liked the green in the original better. Great job. Yea I wasn't 100% with the color correction version...I kinda rushed into it in the post but thanks Steve McBride 4 your critique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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