I don't really mind the gun, but I'm missing a couple of medium close ups on their faces communicating what they're thinking/a shift in mood right before they start making out. Of course you may have had that covered, but the director preferred the more abrupt shift in tone when cutting.
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I don't really mind the gun, but I'm missing a couple of medium close ups on their faces communicating what they're thinking/a shift in mood right before they start making out. Of course you may have had that covered, but the director preferred the more abrupt shift in tone when cutting.
Otherwice a really beautifully shot, film!