Guest Greg Moulton Posted September 28, 2006 Share Posted September 28, 2006 The spot is almost locked. We have two versions, would welcome some feedback on them, which version you think is stronger. Constructive criticism is welcome as we haven't locked picture yet, so any great ideas or things we missed would be incorporated. Thanks. Here's version 6: http://www.dontpanik.tv/Clients/Greg/Monster_v6.mov Here's version 7. [i asked for some of these changes; now I'm not so sure I should have opened my mouth]: http://www.dontpanik.tv/Clients/Greg/Monster_v7.mov FYI, I wrote and directed these. A local DP named Vincent Pascoe (lurks here but doesn't post) shot them, and an LA editor named Mark Panik cut them. I'll pass on any corresponding feedback to them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonathan Bryant Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 It made me giggle. I think the shadow of a fan in the window gave it that cheap office feel. Highlights were alittle on the hot side, was this HD? The last line could use a phone filter effect to make it more realistic. Overall a good spot IMHO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vincent Pascoe Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 I do to post here! it was shot on 35mm 5218 500asa vison 2 stock. VP www.vincentpascoe.com www.myspace.com/vincentpascoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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