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I don't know if this was your input or the editor/director but I feel the conflict (The dangerous road element) needs to be made clear before we see the driver and passengers reactions. The climax lacks for someone watching because they don't get a picture of the danger until the end. What I am getting at is that the payoff at the end would be greater if we saw more of the dangerous road before they drive down it, other wise its a very funny concept, Reminds me of driving in rural Mexico! ; )

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