Rob White Posted January 8, 2009 Share Posted January 8, 2009 Having started uni in september I've had my first chance to shoot with some decent kit (DVX, Redheads, a Mizar), which makes a change! So here are my first two projects: The First The Second Any thoughts or advice would be really helpful. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
James Martin Posted January 8, 2009 Share Posted January 8, 2009 Hello therre, Welcome to the forum. As a fellow film student, here are my thoughts: Overall, VERY GOOD for a first effort, believe me! I'm two-thirds of the way through my degree and that's still better than some work I've seen from people I know! So, good start. My main points of criticism would be in the first video, you have a slight bit of over-exposure on the woman's shirt. It is only slight, but I believe it is there. It's well exposed otherwise, though. There are also a couple of shots where the lighting is unmotivated (where is it coming from?). In the second video, I love the black-and-white segment (even though the editing is not noir, but that's not what we're commenting on!) but I'm not so keen on the outdoor segment. It just looks a little too cold to me, though this of course could be what you were going for. If so, congrats again - did you do that in camera or in post? Regards, James Martin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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