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DP Reel


Ben Ng

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Hi Ben,

 

Overall, it looks good. I would remove the opening shot of the DJ and the shot of the kidnapped girl. They are not up to par with the other material. Also, the bathroom scene feels too long, probably in part because of the slow dolly shot. I would only show one of the guys peeping over the top of the stall. Otherwise, it's too much of the same aesthetic.

 

Good luck!

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