Critique my 2-minute promotional piece for a holiday cottage

[Tom patterson]

Hello,

 

Just thought I'd post the video I've completed. I created both the animation part and all the footage using a borrowed sony DV camera. I also used after effects to stablise the film and a lot of colour correction.

 

I also had a friend do the voice over for the narration.

 

Would love to know what you people think. (it's also in HD)

 

 

Thanks a lot.