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Guest Robert G Andrews

Hmmm.... good but hard on the ears. Anyway, your main problem up until about 1-minute is that it's just getting going and my attention is being tested. I think you need more sexy shots and you should integrate more of a flirt throughout between him and her. I think you may find a different girl. Finally, I liked the creature (like an octupus), but it takes us almost 3 1/2 minutes to get there!

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