Eric Castillo Posted January 20, 2013 Posted January 20, 2013 "A young girl's message makes its way into a struggling boy's life" This is the second short film I have made, improving slowly but surely. Written and Directed by Eric Castillo http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jZ_dT2V0URg&list=UUsTYaGYnM3BUWm49AEdmAjA&index=7
Premium Member Matthew W. Phillips Posted January 20, 2013 Premium Member Posted January 20, 2013 Wow, between 13 secs and 15 secs you broke the 180 degree rule. I stopped watching then as I became really confused. Footage seems a bit shaky for digital...did you use a tripod?
Eric Castillo Posted February 15, 2013 Author Posted February 15, 2013 (edited) Yea I made this over 2 years ago, the second thing I had ever filmed. Happy to say I've improved. Barely used a tripod Edited February 15, 2013 by Eric Castillo
Guest Christopher Sheneman Posted February 21, 2013 Posted February 21, 2013 Not bad, timely structure. Soft colors, perfect for Florida. It seems like everything filmed there is gaudy and harsh. Good message!
Remedios Estrada Posted February 26, 2013 Posted February 26, 2013 Nice job. I assumed the "shaky camera"Matthew complained about was stylistic. I think it worked. Very nicely done. I'd love to see some of your more current work.
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