Shane Astaire Posted July 13, 2014 Share Posted July 13, 2014 This is my first short film, don't critique it too harshly but I want honest opinions. Let me know what you think! Thank you! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5MIVy71YBWw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luke Mason Posted July 14, 2014 Share Posted July 14, 2014 Good work, I noticed that the music sounds very peaceful, however most of the editing and camera movement did not express this kind of peacefulness, also for a nature film it's advisable to maintain a deep focus 70-80% of the time, so people get to appreciate all the details. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Astaire Posted July 14, 2014 Author Share Posted July 14, 2014 Thank you for the post, i appreciate the advice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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