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Short Films of Japan events, lifestyle, and culture - critiques highly appreciated.

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I never heard of this sport. A bit of text to introduce what is going to be shown might help the viewer.The scenes were put together rather haphazzardly. They don't create a story. The lines of people moving was a bit strange. Are they arriving, or leaving, what are they doing?

The music was too epic for what was being shown. The music is more suited to the Battle of Stalingrad than a couple of matches and people moving in lines.

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15 hours ago, THADDEUS BUENAVENTURA said:

Hi Bob. Thank you greatly for your response and tips. Noted. Looking forward to implementing your pointers on our next project. 



Thaddeus and Clyde

You are very welcome. Good luck.

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