Short Films of Japan events, lifestyle, and culture - critiques highly appreciated.

[THADDEUS BUENAVENTURA]

https://vimeo.com/327032597

We are documenting events here in Japan prior to the 2020 games for practice. Thank you for all your input. We filmed Tokyo Marathon, I love Ireland Parade, Holi 2019, and most recent a Go Ruck event. 

Thank you for your time.

Sincerely,

 

LODI Team Japan

[Bob Speziale]

I never heard of this sport. A bit of text to introduce what is going to be shown might help the viewer.The scenes were put together rather haphazzardly. They don't create a story. The lines of people moving was a bit strange. Are they arriving, or leaving, what are they doing?

The music was too epic for what was being shown. The music is more suited to the Battle of Stalingrad than a couple of matches and people moving in lines.

[THADDEUS BUENAVENTURA]

Hi Bob. Thank you greatly for your response and tips. Noted. Looking forward to implementing your pointers on our next project. 

Sincerely, 

 

Thaddeus and Clyde

Edited April 12, 2019 by THADDEUS BUENAVENTURA

[Bob Speziale]

15 hours ago, THADDEUS BUENAVENTURA said:

Hi Bob. Thank you greatly for your response and tips. Noted. Looking forward to implementing your pointers on our next project. 

Sincerely, 

 

Thaddeus and Clyde

You are very welcome. Good luck.