i had recently shot this short peice as a part of my ma film production course.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ylS_DcUm1hA
i shot it on 16mm. did everything from conceptualization, cinematography, editing, vfx and sound.
the problem is the look. it is not as good and clean looking as the other 16mm films i have seen. what is missing here. where did i goof up. although the grungy look is quite appropriate for the kinda of film in question that i have made. but we will soon be shooting our final films on 16mm. i certainly would not want it to look like this.
my lighting gear was very simple one i suppose. film speed was 200. lights included 2000, 800, 650, ianaro and dedo. i don remember which was used specifically in which shot. but almost all the backlight was provided by 2000 and closeups where done mostly with dedo.
please advise.