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kristian andersen

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  1. hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    ok

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    the war movie

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    was shot on hd

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    its too light in the forest

    Kristian says:

    no

    Kristian says:

    it wasnt

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    my only complaint

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    otherwise, it looks like a lowbudget war movie

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    thats all

    Kristian says:

    yes

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    but what is it

    Kristian says:

    that doesnt make it look strong

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    well

    Kristian says:

    i have some concerns

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    hear me out

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    first of all, the lighting is not in tune with hte mood

    Kristian says:

    VERY TRUE

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    i find it too green

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    however

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    there is no sense of danger

    Kristian says:

    first shot in slow mo

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    works great

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    as a hand held shot

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    however

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    notice the 3rd shot

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    its a static close up

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    of some leaves

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    and some people passing behind

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    that is a bad shot

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    that is one of the reasons it looks amateurish

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    the shot with the military car

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    that comes into the picture

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    he should have it start inside the picture more

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    its like the camera is watiting for it

    Kristian says:

    instead of just capturing it

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    the 3rd shot is bad because its not continuous with the other medium shots

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    its not a closeup, and its not a medium shot

    Kristian says:

    right

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    its in between

    Kristian says:

    its just bad

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    its an ungly shot

    Kristian says:

    yes

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    do u agree

    Kristian says:

    abotu the car

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    yes

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    but thats being anal

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    (the car)

    Kristian says:

    ok lets move on

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    its just afew seconds

    Kristian says:

    2 shots after the car

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    theres a close up of a solider

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    which utilizes low key lighting

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    it is a great shot

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    but all the other shots should have been low key too

    Kristian says:

    well not necessarily

    Kristian says:

    melick is high key

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    but they are too light in an ugly way

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    for ths trailer

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    malick is high key

    Kristian says:

    the tilt of the picture of the soilder

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    bothers me

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    im not sure why

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    its prolly just cos we have signs of amateurishness preivously

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    so this one seems corny

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    altho there is really nothing wrong with it

    hugo.rodas@gmail.com (E-mail Address Not Verified) says:

    which one

    Kristian says:

    its a tilt up

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    of a static soldier

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    i pressume it is a picture of a solider

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    then u have the music kick in

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    the camera lying int he grass

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    the second shot in that sequence

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    is a hand that lies in the grass

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    the shot lasts too long

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    it should be faster

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    and the green is really ugly

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    plus

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    he has just punched up the music

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    to be really dramatic

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    and then he still uses a dissolve

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    from shot to shot

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    dissolve is soft and nice

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    it doesnt work with the drama of the music

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    from there on

    Kristian says:

    its very good

    Kristian says:

    all teh shots

    Kristian says:

    look great

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