CRISTIAN BALTAZAR

HEY THERE, VISUALLY YOUR FILM WAS BEAUTIFUL. HOWEVER, THE STORY LEFT MUCH TO DESIRE. I WISH THAT YOU NOT HAD INCORPORATED THE SNEAKERS, THEY DATE THE FILM WHICH IS SOMETHING YOU NEVER WANT TO DO; UNLESS OF COURSE IT'S A PERIOD PIECE. THE STORY NEVER REALLY CLARIFIED WHY THE COUPLE WAS HIKING AND THE MAN IN BLACK SEEMED A BIT CARTOONISH WITH THE TEARDROP NAILS AND THE BIG DARK CIRCLES. THE LOCATION YOU CHOSE WAS BEAUTIFUL, PROPS FOR THAT ONE. I DID LIKE THE USE OF THE SUBTLE COLOR ALTHOUGH IT CAN COME OFF AS A LITTLE CLICHE, BUT STILL VERY WELL EXECUTED. VERY NICE TOUCH WITH THE SCRIPT FONT.