Many Thanks everyone for the critiques. My photo stuff is below if anyone is interested
http://www.flickr.com/people/dangershark/
Nicholas I've just got slide film at the moment including some BW, so might take me a while to get through them, but I would love to use some I only use negative in my photography, so it makes sense.
Stephen I'm glad that mentioned that, FrantiĊĦek Drtikol inspires me, the way he capture soul in shadowplay. I totally agree Anthony. I wanted to get the feel of the movement in the music with the guitar wails, but maybe did it too much.. I forget how easily it is to play with a zoom sometimes.