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Gobber Dogman

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  1. Nicely shot. The light on the guy as he brushes his teeth is a good simulation of a skylight. The warm light at the breakfast table is a little less convincing. Excellent job lighting the guy at the dinner table. I liked how you left a little detail in the bg, but let the left side fall off to black. Regarding the story; it's really pretty trite. And because so much time is spent in the one sided dialogue, the ending is given away far too early. Although I liked both beginning and ending title shots, the opening dolly shot had little to do with the story. For that matter, what did the character intro (workout/shower/teeth) tell us about the protag? They didn't seem to personalize the guy. Each scene needs to say something: the first few didn't. On the other hand, the closing title shot worked great! So overall I'd say that this was a very well done cine project. Keep shooting.
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