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Guest LondonFilmMan

One tries to imagine if that could be broadcasted... Frankly, I have my doubts. Might they ask you about its PC? I think so eh? It was also a bit immature.

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Wow, a lot of harsh words. I'm guessing this was a spec commercial? I can see your intent, the idea is kind of interesting, but could have been more developed. Possibly something added in that frustrated this guy even more with his browser? For instance, if he was obviously sick (with a cold or something) and was trying to DL a recipe for chicken soup.... I think you could have done more with the idea than a guy going nuts about his browser. The set was interesting, but the lighting could have been much better. It seemed very flat, colorless. I have done some DP work, but very little so I may not be the best to critique lighting or give suggestions in that department...

 

Overall, interesting work, keep writing and shooting.

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