Gareth Roberts Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 Here is a short film that I shot. Would you please critique, and perhaps vote on for the competition. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nAMb7xZGLMM Thank you. Gareth Roberts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saul Rodgar Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 That is a great all around short, good luck in Cannes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Hepburn Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 (edited) Hi Gareth, I too enjoyed it very much. I particularly like the use of camera movement and zooms (just enough). Interesting all the way through. Tom Edited May 15, 2009 by Tom Hepburn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marcus Joseph Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 Very enjoyable, great work. Good luck, dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Jensen Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 I liked it a lot. Whether the mental illness caused his hand problem or the hand problem created his downfall, I don't know, but the story was very compelling to watch. I loved that the director gave us some great visual cues. The shots of the chimps, the baby, the toy, the picture in the restaurant, and the actor wipe onto the piano. The sound was great. I hope it does well. It shows you can tell a story with pictures. I absolutely hated the shot of the beer being wasted. Especially if it was cold and frosty. :P Other than that minor detail it was very, very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gareth Roberts Posted May 19, 2009 Author Share Posted May 19, 2009 Thank you all for your viewing and encouragement. Gareth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serge Teulon Posted May 19, 2009 Share Posted May 19, 2009 Hey Gareth, I really enjoyed the film. I thought your camera work was very good and completely in step with the storyline. Good luck in Cannes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gareth Roberts Posted May 21, 2009 Author Share Posted May 21, 2009 Thank you to all who viewed this short and thank you to all that voted for it in the competition. Thanks for the comments and encouragement. The competition is over and the short has been taken down. Thanks, Gareth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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