Andy Joesoef Posted July 5, 2011 Share Posted July 5, 2011 (edited) http://vimeo.com/25990445 I appreciate it !! Edited July 5, 2011 by Andy Joesoef Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Healey Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 thx for posting this. i was quite captivated & enjoyed both the 'story' & the visuals - the poetry, if you will. i have more words (will come later)- but wanted to send you props for your hard work. dh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andy Joesoef Posted July 7, 2011 Author Share Posted July 7, 2011 thx for posting this. i was quite captivated & enjoyed both the 'story' & the visuals - the poetry, if you will. i have more words (will come later)- but wanted to send you props for your hard work. dh wow, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andy Joesoef Posted July 9, 2011 Author Share Posted July 9, 2011 Is it really that bad or you are all speechless. I really have no clue, but well this is my first short ever. I don't really care if its bad, I just really enjoyed the process :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt Stevens Posted July 17, 2011 Share Posted July 17, 2011 It's too long and repetitive. Cut it down to less than a minute and it will be interesting. That isn't sarcasm. I think it will be much improved by gutting it to its core. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premium Member Matthew W. Phillips Posted July 17, 2011 Premium Member Share Posted July 17, 2011 I agree with Matt. This is an interesting idea but you dont want it to wear out its welcome. I would keep it at <2 minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andy Joesoef Posted August 9, 2011 Author Share Posted August 9, 2011 It's too long and repetitive. Cut it down to less than a minute and it will be interesting. That isn't sarcasm. I think it will be much improved by gutting it to its core. thanks for your critique, could you tell me specifically the part that is repetitive. i tried to be more visual than anything because the story was not written at all. again, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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