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The ending is great and I liked the shot of the eggs.

Generally you need to work a lot on your framing although there are some nice bits in there.

 

The obvious big question tho, is what on earth is special about your opening shot!!???

I write this time and time again but you need to get people at the start.

Theres no point it having an interesting ending as everyone will have turned off by then!

 

Freya

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