Please critique my graduation reel !

[Roy Bou Deleh]

Hello guys, I recently graduated film school, in my college we would learn everything film related and then everyone would kinda find his way and pick his department, but I knew I wanted to be a DP so was mainly focused on that aspect throughout all the projects that we had to do.

This reel includes some personal projects as well as some other projects I would shoot for my aspiring directors classmates.

I'm still not sure about the edit nor the music but figured what I made up until now looks somewhat like a complete reel, so I would like to know your opinions and critiques to be able to improve it since at this point I need someone with a fresh eye to give me his opinion! 

Thanks 

 

[Joel Andersson]

Looks great man, good job ?

[Simon Wyss]

Something with rich artificial lighting, the ol’ high-key thing, would have been interesting to see. Else, courageous with the natural light.

[Stephen Sanchez]

Looks nice. Thank you for not making their faces fall into blackness on the fill side. It looks natural.