Nathaniel Demuth Posted March 8, 2022 Share Posted March 8, 2022 I just finished my first short film and I would love some feedback. I'm a high school student and I wrote, directed, and shot this film as well as wrote the music. We had two days to shoot so it was in a rush, but I'm happy with the result on such a condensed time frame and with no experience. You can find it here on YouTube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniel D. Teoli Jr. Posted April 20, 2022 Share Posted April 20, 2022 (edited) Nice little film. End shot seemed out of place though. Most of the film was pretty smooth with edits and timing. End zoom-in seemed jerky and was out of focus. But for no experience you did a good job overall. Make some more films and send em in. Having an interesting story and the right cast is a big help to any film. Good luck! Edited April 20, 2022 by Daniel D. Teoli Jr. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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