It looks like you had some great equipment and the music video's quality and look shows that. I just thought that if you wanted to follow mainstream punk music videos you should have many more cuts. For example Alternating between singer, drumer, guitarist, singer, guitarist etc. That would have drawn the audience into the fast pace and the roughness that is characteristic of punk music. It looked great though and I liked how you used the handheld camera moves and your dolly/zoom. Lots of people use the dolly/zoom just for kicks and it makes their footage look really amaturish.
The trailer for the short seemed pretty cool but I watched it 3 times and I couldn't figure out what it was. thats good though because it made me want to watch the actual short.
Great Job, I am really new and I love to see what other people have done to get inspiration.