Might make it a bit shorter. 3 minutes is a bit long for a "reel" in my opinion. The first part I feel like I am watching a short film, not a reel. And as Kieran suggested- more variety in shots. Demo your flexibility to shoot varied setups. And again as K said- what is your target? If you want commercial work as well you should show you can do it. Showing you can make commercial stuff look like film puts you way ahead of the pack of "videographers".
Best of luck to you!
Jim
www.theultimatehdproductions.com
