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Hello all, my schedule is finally settling down a bit and I want to shoot something. I was wondering if there was a good website/place to find a bunch of basic, beginner scripts to get a feel for the trade. I'll be doing the camera work on a semi-old sony handicam, but it's really just to get some experience, so it won't matter much. I'll be doing the casting, directing, camera work, lighting, and editing and such, I just need the script and later, actors. (Actors will be easy to come by)

 

Also, if there is already a topic on this, please just send it my way.

 

 

 

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Michael Kernan

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Hello all, my schedule is finally settling down a bit and I want to shoot something. I was wondering if there was a good website/place to find a bunch of basic, beginner scripts to get a feel for the trade. I'll be doing the camera work on a semi-old sony handicam, but it's really just to get some experience, so it won't matter much. I'll be doing the casting, directing, camera work, lighting, and editing and such, I just need the script and later, actors. (Actors will be easy to come by)

 

Also, if there is already a topic on this, please just send it my way.

Thank you,

Michael Kernan

 

If you are going to the trouble of doing everything you say than you should do your best to do it for real. That would mean a real script. Sometimes you can hook up with actors who want to do demo pieces. Often time?s short stories offer good ideas. An anthology of horror stories might have a simple story in one location that would be a good starter piece.

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I'm really just going to do everything basic. I just want to see if this is what I want to put money and time into, so it's just going to be a test run.

 

 

Getting good actors will not be a problemo, I'm in the drama club here and I can grab a few actors from there. Plus, I know many actors from around the state that wouldn't mind helping out.

 

 

Like I said, all I need is just a test script. XP

 

Edit: Wow, I sound really cocky! SORRY! All I want out of this is to get some experience in the field. After this shoot, I will pursue a real script and such.

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Getting good actors will not be a problemo.

 

Well, we'll see when you post your work which I am looking forward to seeing. Great film actors have a sublety and an on-screen chrisma that often eludes even the best of stage actors. I would like to see what you are capible of doing in any case, though. I like cocky people if they have the chops to back it up. Let's see what you got, kid. B)

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Hello Michael,

 

James is right. Screen acting is a whole different animal from stage acting. We have a motto at Easton Pictures: "Never hire theater people!" The reason is, their acting experience is for the stage. Their stuff has to be seen, heard and interpreted from as much as a couple hundred feet away (back rows). Screen acting is EXTREMELY INTIMATE. The camera is right in the actor's face. Everything they do is fully seen. The presentation not only needs to be subtle because of the intimacy of camera placement, but, film acting is more of a cueing device than acting. The actor ever-so-slightly indicates the emotion, therefore allowing the veiwer the priveledge of "feeling" that emotion. The problem with stage actors is that they want to "feel" that emotion and thereby steal that moment from the veiwer. That pisses the veiwer off... alot. Nothing will kill your work surer than a single moment of "ham".

 

I suggest you watch About Schmit for a fine example of screen acting. You know everything the director wants YOU to feel because Jack knows exactly how much to give YOU so that YOU feel and thereby, OWN the emotions.

 

Knock 'em dead, Dude,

 

Paul

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Getting good actors will not be a problemo, I'm in the drama club here and I can grab a few actors from there. Plus, I know many actors from around the state that wouldn't mind helping out.

Look for actors that act with their eyes. For a primer, check out movies like "The Magnificent Seven". That cast was so good that I think the movie could have be made without dialogue - just picture and music.

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Yes, I understand what all of you are saying. This is, truthfully, going to be a crappy film with crappy high school actors. I will probably end up not even using some of the "better" actors, mainly because I just want this to be a fun learning experience. Don't expect anything good. :D

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Well with an attitude like that, how can you miss :blink: . Every film you start is going to be the greatest peice of cinema ever put on screen otherwise what's the point? Don't defeat yourself before you even roll the camera. One of the funest movies for the cast and crew to make that eas ever done was "Cannonball Run 11". Those guys had a blast making it, unfortunately the audience did have nearly as much fun watching it, which is BAD because it was suppose to be a comedy. Take your art seriously or don't do it at all because an audience is going to have to sit through it and you OWE them your best effort, besides making movies is a HELL of a lot of work so why put all that effort into a BAD one? Do the absolute best you can and let us see what you've done. We'll decide as an audience if it's high art of a piece of tripe and we'll give you honest tips on how you might improve your next one. Give it your BEST shot, kid and at the very least you'll earn a little respect. B)

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Haha, alright.

 

 

What I'm trying to say is that I'm not making this to be seen and taken seriously. It's really just to try out some stuff and screw around with friends. That's not to say I won't attempt to do a good job on it, it's just that nobody should expect much. ^__^

 

 

 

I'm only a sophmore in high school. I still have a bit of time to screw around in life. :lol:

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Hello Michael,

 

James is right. Screen acting is a whole different animal from stage acting. We have a motto at Easton Pictures: "Never hire theater people!" The reason is, their acting experience is for the stage. Their stuff has to be seen, heard and interpreted from as much as a couple hundred feet away (back rows). Screen acting is EXTREMELY INTIMATE. The camera is right in the actor's face. Everything they do is fully seen. The presentation not only needs to be subtle because of the intimacy of camera placement, but, film acting is more of a cueing device than acting. The actor ever-so-slightly indicates the emotion, therefore allowing the veiwer the priveledge of "feeling" that emotion. The problem with stage actors is that they want to "feel" that emotion and thereby steal that moment from the veiwer. That pisses the veiwer off... alot. Nothing will kill your work surer than a single moment of "ham".

 

I suggest you watch About Schmit for a fine example of screen acting. You know everything the director wants YOU to feel because Jack knows exactly how much to give YOU so that YOU feel and thereby, OWN the emotions.

 

Knock 'em dead, Dude,

 

Paul

 

 

 

 

 

I think you may be cutting yourself off from a formidable wealth of talent by excluding "theatre people". Sure tv or film acting requires subtlety but there are plenty of actors who have huge stage experience and create big performances on stage but can achieve an "intimacy" in performance before a camera. Talented actors are often versatile in that way.

 

David

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I must agree with david, even though I have very little experience in the field. Just from what I know from my friends, the majority of them would like to be on film rather than stay on theatre. When they perform monologues, which are much more intimate, they can perform them well.

 

To each it's own.

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Post your request for short scripts online. My last film I posted on IMDB and a few writers sites and got some awsome submissions (over 200!) I was offering money for the scripts, but I am sure you will find lots of scripts if all you can offer is credit/differed. Just make sure to write up a contract to that extent. That way if you get to festival and do well, nobody is trying to sue you because they didn't expect you to make money/exposure from it.

 

Try shooting S8 as well, if you want it to be good, and you can't afford a better video camera (you'd need at least a $27,000 camera to get decent results, 4,000 for medocre-low level results) and you probably can't afford 16mm, but an s8 camera would be cheap, and the film inexpensive.

 

Goodluck!

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Alrighty, will do.

 

 

 

I'm not planning on buying a camera anytime soon, I'm just gonna use my crappy sony handicam I got a few years back for a couple hundred bucks. It's got semi-decent quality and it will be good enough for what I will be doing for a while.

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A handy cam will do for now, just to get the hang of the workflow, but don't expect to produce anything you want to show people 3 years down the road (when video cameras are 73 generations more advanced than a handycam). I have still (and especially today) regret not doing the S8 thing, I stuck to video too long since as I was learning, digital cams and editing software kept up with my learning curve. Agood s8 camera will give you a unique look that very few early-students have, and may give you more respect for knowing what your doing, rather than tweeking until it looks good in the monitor. It also gets you used to the knowledgebase that is required when you want to advance, and keeps you honest (I know some of my early movies had WAY too much coverage, just so I could 'find the movie in post'. Over time I learned to shoot what I need and very little else for saftey, but it would have been easier if that was my focus from the begining.)

 

At least if you shoot video, keep track of your shooting ratio and work on reducing it as time goes by (once you get to a 10:1 you can stop, but try and increase your takes at that point, and reduce your coverage.)

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Try shooting S8 as well, if you want it to be good, and you can't afford a better video camera (you'd need at least a $27,000 camera to get decent results, 4,000 for medocre-low level results)

 

Dude they shot Tadpole and 28 days later on $5000 XL-1s! Tadpole starred Sigorney Weaver and got a full theatrical release, 28 days later made about a bazillion dollars and there are hundreds of other flms made for even less. You do NOT need a 27K camera to shoot a decient movie and the arrogant, ellitist attitude that you do is abserd. Any mini DV camera will work great especially for a beginning filmmaker who's still in highschool. Go with a mini DV and computer software editing. Go to film when you have more money and understand the basics. Work on telling a good story visually. Shoot with editing in mnd so you have te shots you need to tell that story when the shooting is done. Use basic simple lighting ans set-ups and work on pulling the best preformances out of your actors that you can. Keep the film short 5 to 15 minutes and don't quit until it's done, then you will see what it is to be a filmmaker.

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Thanks for the advice!

 

 

Any film I do from now until I graduate high school is probably gonna be shot with this camera, edited on my pc, and be really low budget. I'm not expecting to make a great movie, I'm doing it because it will be fun to see how my work progresses and how much I can learn on my own, before going to college.

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I still have a bit of time to screw around in life. :lol:

When I was thirteen I had my first ham license, built a transmitter, a telephone ringer for a high-school play from scratch, and was rapidly increasing my electronics knowledge.

 

You don't have to be in your twenties to get going on life. If you start trying your darndest to "do it right" now, you'll have a lot of practice at it by the time you get into the real world. I'll guarantee you that knowing how to get it right will open more doors in the future than you can imagine. For instance: I moved to New York from Chicago to work in theatre somewhere around age 24. My reputation as a damn good theatre electronics type had proceeded me and I had a full-time backstage technical job at a prestigious facility (92nd Street Y) two weeks after I arrived in New York.

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I didn't mean to say that I don't attempt to learn things to help me in my future. I can build a computer easy, make up a good lighting scheme for any theatre show very well in a short period of time, etc. I have my qualities, I was just saying that in terms of film making, I still have some time to joke around with it, while still learning.

 

 

If film doesn't work out, I would like to do something as have described that you do, Hal. I admire you. :)

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I was just saying that in terms of film making, I still have some time to joke around with it, while still learning.

 

Thats the attitude. In HS, film making is mostly a joke. A good time with friends and something to watch when your done. But its a ton of fun, and only gets better with time. Keep it light on set and you will get where your going.

 

 

 

 

Dude they shot Tadpole and 28 days later on $5000 XL-1s! Tadpole starred Sigorney Weaver and got a full theatrical release, 28 days later made about a bazillion dollars and there are hundreds of other flms made for even less. You do NOT need a 27K camera to shoot a decient movie and the arrogant, ellitist attitude that you do is abserd.

 

 

Kind of a moot point, because 28 days later was not shot on a $5000 XL-1s. They were shot on cameras that cost upwards of 27,000 when loaded with the adaptor and lenses they were using (XL1s body, PL mount adaptor, Cine prime lenses, forgot which ones s4's I think. Each lens cost more than 4 bodies) and IN MY OPINION (should have used that qualifier earlier) that film did not look good. It looked mediocre (along the lines I was saying) I was aluding to the SDX-900 which at 27K looks pretty good for what it is, and the DVX-100 for the 4000 to look decent-to-low level range.

 

And no its not arogent, ellitist attitude I suffer from, its realism (or standards, choose one). For TV, yes an XL-1 is something that can work out. But for a film, where your trying to create atmosphere you are often fighting the limitations of the device to get it to work (I have shot movies on the DVX-100, SDX-900, HVR-ZU1 and just about any other video camera you care to name) and always am fighting the limitations that restrict very specific things I want to do. This is not to say it can't be done or its impossible to get something presentable, but if your goal is cinematography, then your doing yourself a disservice to ignore the difference between different video cameras and find what you need to change to work with both. I was pointing out that for the 5000 it would cost to buy an XL-1, you can buy TONS of S8 and a decent camera, and get that film look out of the box. I really wish we didn't have people saying that having an opinion one way or another makes you an ellitist, or arrogant. Just say my opinion is wrong....and maybe why its wrong rather than resort to cheap personal attacks.

 

and I told him to stick to the video for now, because earlier I did not realize his age. When I was pushing the s8, I was simply encouraging him to expand his knowledge base. I only practiced film with stills when I was in highschool, and shot a million minutes of video as a kid, and looking back, I really wish I had put up the money for film, if only for one film a year (I made 3-4 per year when I was in highschool) Video helps you feel good about yourself, comfortable. Not what you need when you want to find things to learn (cause its what you never thought to ask about is usually what you need to learn most)

 

Tadpole I did not see, but for open water, they spent several hundred thousand power-windowing the hell out of it, and comping in digital skies, since they blew out in most shots when it was photographed.

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I think you may be cutting yourself off from a formidable wealth of talent by excluding "theatre people". Sure tv or film acting requires subtlety but there are plenty of actors who have huge stage experience and create big performances on stage but can achieve an "intimacy" in performance before a camera. Talented actors are often versatile in that way.

 

David

 

 

Very true. Sir Anthony Hopkins came from the theatre.

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