Federico Lang Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 (edited) Hi, my name is Federico Lang and I shot this short film at school. Please feel free to make all the critics you wish. Thanks Full quality or the small version Edited February 20, 2007 by Federico Lang Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tugce Sen Posted February 21, 2007 Share Posted February 21, 2007 Hi, It looks so nice, I like the depth of the field, and vivid colors and blurry look, what kind of camera did you use? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan Peline Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 Hi, It was quite pleasant as a film but I found it a bit overlit for me. And a little bit flat. It just felt too lit and therefore a little artificial. I personally would have liked a little bit of contrast ratio on faces. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martin Yernazian Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 I agree with Morgan Also as a director I see a really weak plot here, even do the story is evident, things seem to move really slow, more slow than it should be. Everything wasn't a surprise, the acting was .... blah, I could say that the girl was the best.... but still her manerisms where to obvious. Still I give you kudos for beign a student film, is much better thatn a lot of stuff made by students Best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Federico Lang Posted February 23, 2007 Author Share Posted February 23, 2007 Well thanx for the replys!! We shot using a DVX-100AE (pal version) + M2 and canon lenses. A curious thing about the short is that the 1st AC forgot to callibrate the field monitors so we saw everything a lot darker... yep a student after all... and I really was so stressed up with the shoot that it didn't come to my mind back then. That's the reson for the overlight. About the story iit was a small exercise, writen in 5 minutes and that became big because I really wanted to do a good job. We were supposed to shot a short film on one location in under 12hours.. so that was the result... Keep posting please!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Evan Pierre Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 Pretty good, it was slightly overlit especially in the beginning when he comes to sit down. The light was not very even and I could see him cast about 6 different shadows at that time. All in all it flowed pretty well, and I liked the costumes and set dressing. Only other major issue I noticed was this :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Federico Lang Posted February 23, 2007 Author Share Posted February 23, 2007 Pretty good, it was slightly overlit especially in the beginning when he comes to sit down. The light was not very even and I could see him cast about 6 different shadows at that time. All in all it flowed pretty well, and I liked the costumes and set dressing. Only other major issue I noticed was this :lol: Also saw it... but we also had limited time to edit and post and I had to mount the train effect before this.. the time wasn`t enough. Believe it or not you are the first to notice :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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